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We know that we are often tested on parallelism on standardised tests. The logically parallel entities should be grammatically parallel. But today, we need to talk about circumstances where you might be tempted to employ parallelism but it would be incorrect to do so.
For example, look at this sentence:
A New York City ordinance of 1897 regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted pedestrians right-of-way.
Is everything ok here? Well, it certainly seems so. We have four elements in parallel:
regulated …
mandated …
required …
granted …
But actually, there is a problem in this sentence:
‘regulated…’ will not be parallel to the rest of the three elements. The rest of the three elements will be in parallel.
Before we explain why, let’s take a simpler example:
The girl sitting next to me wears blue everyday, eats only waffles, and listens to music in office.
The sentence will not be ‘The girl sits next to me…’ because ‘sit’ is not parallel to other verbs. “sit” modifies the girl and is not used as a verb here. It is a present participle modifier modifying ‘girl’. It specifies the girl about whom we are talking.
Similarly, in the original sentence, ‘regulate’ is modifying ‘ordinance of 1897’. It is telling you which ordinance of 1897.
The other verbs ‘mandated’, ‘required’ and ‘granted’ are used as verbs and are parallel. They are assimilated under ‘regulate’. They tell you how the ordinance regulated.
How did it regulate?
mandated …
required …
granted …
Hence, you cannot use ‘regulated’ here. You must use ‘regulating’ – the present participle modifier to modify the ordinance. So you have to think logically – are the items in the given list actually parallel? Are they equal elements? If yes, then they need to be grammatically parallel too; else not.
Here is the complete official question:
Question: A New York City ordinance of 1897 regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted pedestrians right-of-way.
(A) regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and it granted
(B) regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles anhour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at alltimes, granting
(C) regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebarsat all times, and it granted
(D) regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles anhour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands onhandlebars at all times, and granted
(E) regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all times, and granted
Solution:
From our above discussion, we know that we have choose one of (C), and (E).
(A), (B) and (D) put “regulate” parallel to the other verbs.
Still, let’s point out all the errors in these options:
(A) regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an
hour, required of cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all
times, and it granted
Parallelism problem – regulated cannot be parallel to mandated and other verbs. Also, ‘mandated’ is not parallel to ‘it granted’. Besides, ‘required of X to do Y’ is unidiomatic.
(B) regulated the use of bicycles, mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an
hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all
times, granting
Parallelism problem – ‘regulated’ is parallel to ‘mandated’ though it should not be.
‘granting’ is not parallel to ‘mandated’ and ‘required’ though it needs to be parallel.
You also need an ‘and’ before the last element of the list ‘and granted …’
(D) regulating the use of bicycles, mandating a maximum speed of eight miles an
hour, requiring of cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on
handlebars at all times, and granted
This is not a valid sentence because the main clause does not have a verb. ‘regulating…’, ‘mandating…’ and ‘requiring…’ are the present participle modifiers.
‘granted…’ is not parallel to the other elements. Besides, ‘requiring of X that they do Y’ is unidiomatic.
Now let’s look at the leftover options:
(C) regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an
hour, required cyclists that they keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars
at all times, and it granted
‘it granted’ is not parallel to the other verbs. Besides, ‘required X that they do Y’ is unidiomatic.
(E) regulating the use of bicycles mandated a maximum speed of eight miles an
hour, required cyclists to keep feet on pedals and hands on handlebars at all
times, and granted
Perfect! All issues sorted out!
Answer (E)
